Your blog post touched on a very pressing issue which I think makes it all the more interesting to read. I really liked how you started the post: “As most Toronto residents will remember, 2016 was a memorable year for housing in the city however for all the wrong reasons.” By describing 2016 as “memorable”, I expected a positive comment to follow. However, you then continued to say it was memorable for “all the wrong reasons”. This surprised me and got me hooked. Further, you incorporated signal phrases and in-text citations, so, as a reader, I knew that the information you were telling me came from a variety of perspectives/people, thus boosting the credibility of your blog post. Thank you for this interesting blog post; I will be keeping my eye out on the housing market even more inquisitively now!
I will link Rahul’s blog post down below. Go check it out!